diff --git a/content/hiring/2020-10-project-manager.md b/content/hiring/2020-10-project-manager.md
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--- a/content/hiring/2020-10-project-manager.md
+++ b/content/hiring/2020-10-project-manager.md
@@ -15,16 +15,15 @@ include:
 
 * Leading a remote team of designers, developers, usability experts and QA
 testers
-* Planning and overseeing the delivery of software improvements according to
-a schedule agreed with our funders
+* Planning and overseeing the delivery of software improvements
 * Monitoring progress and costs to keep the project within time and budget constraints
-* Coordinating the work schedules of team members
+* Coordinating the work of team members, who may be working part-time in different timezones
 * Communicating with funders and other stakeholders
 * Delivering quarterly progress and financial reports
 
 **Essential skills:**
 
-* Proven ability to deliver software projects according to expected scope, timeline and budget
+* Proven ability to deliver software projects with the expected scope, timeline and budget
 * Experience of Agile methods
 * Fluent written and spoken English
 * Excellent communication and teamwork skills
@@ -33,8 +32,8 @@ a schedule agreed with our funders
 
 **Desirable skills:**
 
-* Experience of mobile software projects
-* Experience of security-oriented software projects
+* Experience of managing mobile software projects
+* Experience of managing security-oriented software projects
 * Knowledge of information security
 * Familiarity with free/open source software