From f93be3c985f000266d4e7e0842d8ee783003ebc7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: akwizgran <michael@briarproject.org>
Date: Tue, 8 Oct 2019 10:05:20 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak wording.

---
 content/news/2019-briar-1.2-released-remote-contacts.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/news/2019-briar-1.2-released-remote-contacts.md b/content/news/2019-briar-1.2-released-remote-contacts.md
index f1eda65..e8d313e 100644
--- a/content/news/2019-briar-1.2-released-remote-contacts.md
+++ b/content/news/2019-briar-1.2-released-remote-contacts.md
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ This release allows users to add each other securely by exchanging links.
 Previously users needed to meet in person or ask a mutual contact to introduce them.
 
 Most messenger apps find your contacts by uploading your phone's contact list to a server.
-Since Briar is protecting metadata and contact relationships,
+Since Briar is designed to protect metadata and contact relationships,
 it instead uses the Tor network
-to [connect directly](https://2019.www.torproject.org/docs/onion-services.html.en)
+to [connect directly and securely](https://2019.www.torproject.org/docs/onion-services.html.en)
 to the person you're adding,
 without revealing your contact list to anyone.
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Users who are concerned about such attacks
 should continue to use the old method of adding contacts in person for maximum assurance.
 
 The design and and user testing of this new feature
-was carried out by [Ura](https://www.ura.design).
+was carried out by [Ura Design](https://www.ura.design).
 Work on this feature was supported by the [Open Technology Fund](https://www.opentech.fund/).
 
 
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