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         <p>
           Thanks to support from the
-          <a href="https://www.opentech.fund/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Open Technology Fund</a>, the new release has a dark theme
-          designed by <a href="http://www.ura.design/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Ura Design</a>. Users can switch between the light
-          and dark themes, or use an automatic mode that activates the dark
-          theme at night.
-          The conversation screen has also been redesigned, with rounded
-          message bubbles and a new color scheme.
+          <a href="https://www.opentech.fund/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Open Technology Fund</a>,
+          the new release has a dark theme
+          designed by <a href="http://www.ura.design/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Ura Design</a>.
+          Users can switch between the light and dark themes,
+          or use an automatic mode that activates the dark theme at night.
+          The conversation screen has also been redesigned,
+          with rounded message bubbles and a new color scheme.
         </p>
 
         <p>
           This release also adds lots of new emoji
           and the ability to modify emoji skin tones.
+          Illustrative screenshots are available below.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          To protect the user's privacy when other people are using the
-          device, this release allows the user to lock Briar without signing
-          out. The device's PIN or password is needed to unlock the app. On
-          recent versions of Android, the app can be unlocked with a
-          fingerprint.
+          To protect the user's privacy when other people are using the device,
+          this release allows to lock Briar without signing out.
+          The device's PIN or password is needed to unlock the app.
+          On recent versions of Android, the app can also be unlocked with a fingerprint.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          Briar now reminds the user to sign back in after restarting the
-          device or upgrading the app.
+          Briar now reminds the user to sign back in after restarting the device
+          or upgrading the app.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          Briar uses the Tor network to connect users with their
-          contacts. But in some countries, <a href="http://grobox.de/tor" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">access to Tor is blocked</a>.
-          Briar will now try to detect this and use bridges to access the Tor
-          network when needed. (Bridges are computers run by volunteers around
-          the world that help to provide access to the Tor network when it's
-          blocked.)
+          Briar uses the Tor network to connect users with their contacts.
+          But in some countries, <a href="http://grobox.de/tor" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">access to Tor is blocked</a>.
+          Briar will now try to detect this
+          and use bridges to access the Tor network when needed.
+          Bridges are computers run by volunteers around the world
+          that help to provide access to the Tor network when it's blocked.
         </p>
 
         <p>
           Work on the next big release is already under way.
-          Among other things, the Briar Project is working on a new way to
-          add contacts securely without meeting in person, and support for
-          attaching images to messages.
+          Among other things,
+          the Briar Project is working on a new way to add contacts securely
+          without meeting in person,
+          and support for attaching images to messages.
         </p>
 
         <h3>Media</h3>